Thursday, May 11, 2006

Spritely Pixel on Carriage.

Proposed shooting script.
Players: Spritely Pixel as Ashley Ravenal (of the Tennessee Ravenals); Kris Kaloche as Julie Hamilton. They are aged about 30, elegantly dressed.)

Opening shot: Side view of bridge. Just before carriage is positioned.

(Stage direction: SP will position carriage on bridge. Empty. TM will cut positioning activity and use a dissolve transition to next scene. Viewer will see carriage appear.)

Shot 2. Carriage alone. 30 seconds.

(Stage direction: SP and KK take positions side by side facing water and Hobo Village, where side boards are missing. TM will be getting view from HV side of bridge. TM will cut out positioning so the view shows them appearing.)

SP and KK stand motionless for about 15 sec. Then may use movement or animation to show an emotional moment. (for example, one turns away, they hold hands or embrace). They then sit in carriage.

Carriage moves slowly along bridge to land. About 45 sec. Stop near land. Hold 10 Sec. CUT

(Stage direction: remove carriage for TM to get 30 sec of same scene w/o carriage. )

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